I signed up for a subscription to Autocrit.com.
It tells you all kinds of useful things about your writing like…
- Over-used words
- Sentence structure/variations
- Cliches and redundancies
- Repeated words and phrases
- Initial pronouns
I through in my revised combination of Chapter 1-2 and I have a few huge problems.
- Overuse of ‘was/were’
- Overuse of ‘that’
So much to clean up. I might need a year. I’m going to clean up the revision of Chapter 1 and post it on Scribophile this weekend to see if it is received better. It is now dialogue based and covers items from Chapter 2.